Dear bloogg
co co nut smells fills the air
love and lust need nothing
warm air cold drinks
tallness of life
every little thing
happens love meaning
rivet of non formality's
beaded on a leave
on top of the world skipping
nothing matters who cares
the new rock bottom
imagination of worse
lime fungus
lucky to be alive
little things feed the rotation
fuck negative shit
embrace smiles
do what you want
shake well
caring about you
weakened and un sure
want need will get over
wildness always lurking
I am shaped
I will morph
what ifs
fat mags
seared
formed
here am now
future unknown
desires known
this isn't it
anger drama stress
early grave
blow me
I do what I want
Hey Ren,
ReplyDeleteI like this poetry draft, especially the line "I do what I want." Every time my husband thinks I'm being unreasonable, I love to smile and say that to him. Whether it makes me a brat or not, I do what I want. Thanks for building a poem around this saying!
Thanks Lindsey! That is funny and sweet that you say that. I say it occasionally too but b/c it is to your hubby it made me smile.
ReplyDeleteI wrote this in feeling that sometimes it is important to just ignore world and one’s problems and just relax! But it’s not as a way of life. Walkin around saying fuck everything I do what I want… lol. Well that's my rant.
Im glad you like it!
Yes totally negative but some how saying it can be so freeing so positive. Agreed! lots of the sense comes from point of view and filling in the gaps. It does put power and meaning of each word on roids.
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